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Post by Ashe on Jan 7, 2008 6:26:59 GMT -5
I made this thread so that those participating in the Roleplay Zombie Traitor can discuss the story out of character. I have a small request, biohazardmaniac632 could you please put a space in-between the paragraphs, or when you change from one person speaking to another? There is nothing more dreaded on the net than the "Dreaded Wall of Text". It will make your post easier to read and they will also look better. Another thing, you should edit your posts to capitalize the peoples names... I hope you don't mind my suggestions, and I hope you take no offense to this . But I have found more people will read the story and possibly join it if they are done neatly and are easy to read.
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Post by biohazardmaniac632 on Jan 7, 2008 14:41:44 GMT -5
Sorry about that, yes I guess I have started to do that a bit. Thanks for the advice I usually dont write like that, it must be some habit I have got myself into. From now I will make my entries more clearer.
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Post by biohazardmaniac632 on Jan 7, 2008 15:16:10 GMT -5
Thanks again for the advice. I probably would have kept on doing the same thing if you didnt speak up about it. I shall give you some karma for giving me that some good, friendly advice.
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Post by Ashe on Jan 7, 2008 17:38:18 GMT -5
Why thank you. I was hoping you wouldn't be offended. I'm glad I could help. And just so you know, Serena doesn't have an apartment. She has a whole estate deep in the Arklay Mountains outside of Raccoon City, left to her when her parents died in the disaster there. That is why she has been able to stay under Umbrella's radar. She was brought up sheltered and in seclusion basically, so they probably think she died in the disaster also. The estate is self-efficient and well protected.
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Post by Ashe on Jan 27, 2008 9:06:43 GMT -5
Devil Doom won't be on for about 3 weeks. I guess he got into some trouble and lost internet privileges. Just thought I'd let you know biohazardmaniac.
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Post by DevilDoom on Jan 27, 2008 23:09:25 GMT -5
Official date if i behave: February 4th or 5th (I NEVER POSTED THIS YOU NEVER HEARD THIS!)
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Post by Ashe on Jan 28, 2008 5:51:26 GMT -5
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Post by DevilDoom on Jan 28, 2008 21:22:08 GMT -5
Glad to be missed now im sorry to say that until my return you must NOT post in the Zombie Traitor RP i Have a important plot twist that could EASILY be ruined if you do certain things i cant go into detail but i am extremly close to getting off even earlier my mom just has to get my dad to agree if this happens then the thread will be continued SOON
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Post by Ashe on Jan 29, 2008 5:40:58 GMT -5
No problem. That is why I made the post the way I did. I have no idea where you wanted it to go, so what I posted is mainly filler ;D
I'll keep my fingers crossed that ye get off early!!! ;D
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Post by pancakeman on Jan 29, 2008 8:50:51 GMT -5
punishment sucks. most of the time my mom forgets that im in trouble and im off but sometimes my bro reminds her and im screwed even longer
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Post by DevilDoom on Jan 30, 2008 14:41:07 GMT -5
Ok it's official IM OFF EARLY!!!!!!!!!! I wont be on AS MUCH but will still have time on if im good
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Post by Ashe on Jan 31, 2008 6:02:47 GMT -5
Yay!!! I'm glad. A little time on is better than no time on ;D
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Post by biohazardmaniac632 on Jan 31, 2008 23:32:49 GMT -5
sorry i sent you a message without realising devil doom so its good to hear your off punishment early oh and by the way if you want my opinion that guy that was bugging you deserved it. i know its not right to say that but that just what i think.
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Post by Leon S. Kennedy on Feb 14, 2008 9:10:51 GMT -5
I hope I didn't mess anything up posting today..... I just saved Serena and Ryan I didn't think that was too big of a scene. Anyway, I like everyone's writing and describing of their characters. I also love the story line! It's
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Post by Ashe on Feb 14, 2008 9:18:23 GMT -5
You didn't mess up anything as far as I can see. I was trying to figure a way out of it for them, and ya saved me the trouble. Thanks. Glad to have ya.
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