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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 9:23:10 GMT -5
That's the trouble. I can't keep the facts in my mind forever. That is why you take notes and have those facts written down. I have tons of files on my pc with facts about RE that I've accumulated over time and have used in writing.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 9:20:32 GMT -5
It gives you tools like story boards that will help you organize your writing. Here is the link for the program: yWriter. I'm glad this was brought up as I notice that I need to update my program to yWriter5.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 9:16:13 GMT -5
I am always taken back to the fact that they aren't killing people just to kill them. They are clearly killing out of self-defense, and that is why it isn't racism. Racism would be killing them because of their race, not because they was trying to munch on your booty.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 9:13:09 GMT -5
True. Though she is a woman. And what does that mean?
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 9:10:01 GMT -5
Your writing ability isn't in question. That you did very well, as we have told you. Your problem was one of having facts wrong. So it isn't your writing ability that was the problem. And the fact problem is easily resolved by doing your research first. I always find it helpful to have detailed profiles for all characters made and a detailed outline of what I am hoping to achieve. The hardest part of writing a story is gathering the required info for it, and making sure you have your facts correct.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 8:29:42 GMT -5
Bad thing with that though is I think I could look over it many times and still not get it. Or rather not get the continuing story. Have you ever tried getting a program for writing novels or stories? There are a few really good ones out there that are free downloads and give you tools to help write and organize a story. The one I found that I like is YWriter4.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 8:23:20 GMT -5
*Sighs* Well that's true too. I really am not trying to be harsh with you. But nothing else seems to work with you. You need to put that defeatist attitude behind you and get over it.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 8:21:27 GMT -5
That is your choice. Sorry to hear it.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 8:19:56 GMT -5
Wow if I had a dollar for everytime I heard that one. You would most likely be the richest man in the world. The truth is you are too impatient. You will also have to change your attitude if you want it to be successful. If you exhibit the behavior there that you do here, it will not be successful. It's one thing when you belong to a site that has a member being rude and complaining all the time, but it is another if the person complaining and being rude is the Admin.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 8:12:28 GMT -5
Well I am discouraged now. Looks like I didn't know jack crap about Resident Evil even though I read the timelines and have been on the site (offical site) and played most of the games.
It's not like it's quitting but I don't feel like continuing with this crappy story. Sorry to discourage you, your knowledge or lack there of in matters of Resident Evil is one that can easily be solved by playing the games over and over, as I'm sure both Spartan and I have done. I happen to have been playing Resident Evil since it very first came out in 1996 (I think that's the right date. I could be wrong.) and have read all that has been written about them, or at least a large majority of what has been written. With that being said, there are still things that I learn about it that I didn't know before. RE is an ongoing story, and it doesn't help that there are many contradictions in the facts. As I said before, you give up way to easy, and should learn that criticism isn't about making you feel bad about yourself or your work. It is about those who have more knowledge than you helping you. The best teacher in life is mistakes, you will always learn more quicker by looking at your mistakes and figuring out where you went wrong and correcting it.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 8:02:28 GMT -5
Fantastic work Leon. Very well written as always. I look forward to more.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 7:59:53 GMT -5
It's not real anyways so whats the big deal? Who said it was a big deal? It is fun to discuss the idiocy of people. I think you've woke up on the wrong side of the bed today and should get right back in and get back up as I'm sick and tired of your childish behavior today. In almost every topic you have responded to today you have been rude and disrespectful of your fellow members. You wondered a while back why you had a negative Karma rating, I'm betting it is for the exact same behavior you repeatedly keep exhibiting here.
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 7:54:33 GMT -5
How about "I'm sorry for acting like a 2 year old."
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 7:53:15 GMT -5
That makes me wrong again. I really don't know anything about the series if I couldn't figure that out. Oh my lands, would you please quit with your pity party? Who said you were wrong? Can't answer that? That would be because no one said you were wrong. If you are referring to my pointing out that the fast moving zombies didn't make an appearance until the 3rd movie, it's the truth. Accept it and deal with, then move on. GROW UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Ashe on Jun 11, 2009 7:44:27 GMT -5
Fine I'll shut up then. I always make people mad anyways. I can see why that would happen. You don't seem to have the ability to exhibit any common courtesy. I would think that with you being in the Army you would have learned at least that. I can't imagine any Drill Sergent putting up with that type of behavior. What you haven't seemed to grasp is that on message boards or forums, people will often disagree with you, or give a criticism to something you have posted. This is the purpose of a board, to allow people to discuss things and to get critiques on work they may post, like writing or graphics. If you can't take that type of adult behavior, then you shouldn't be on the forums. Even my 12 year old son gets that concept. And yes I'm mad. I usually wouldn't handle things like this in the forum itself, but I have repeatedly tried to get you to stop this, and you won't, so drastic measures are called for. No one wants to read "Woh is Me... I make rude comments and when someone calls me on it I say things like; Ok I'll shut up, I only make people mad." Now if you persist you are going to force me to make the warning more than a verbal one. Please don't make me do that.
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