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Post by Wesker218 on Jul 30, 2008 8:56:44 GMT -5
Thanks! I'll wait for one more review to determine if the next chapter will come.
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Post by Wesker218 on Jul 29, 2008 21:48:26 GMT -5
Sigh... I wish I were there to help....even tho I couldn't do anything
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Post by Wesker218 on Jul 29, 2008 13:40:31 GMT -5
COOL CHAPTER!! My first chapter is up and yeah I'm glad Capcom didn't have agents at your house like Konami did in the woods. DARN THEM TAKING OUR IDEAS!!! Lol
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Post by Wesker218 on Jul 29, 2008 13:29:16 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Departure
"Get up you maggots!!!" the commander screamed at what was about 3:00 am on Saturday September 30. Today was VERY important because today happened to be graduation day and the "anniversery" of one of my teammates suicides. He shot himself and the old commander and I watched him do it. Anyway, just for introductions my name is David Ace. I'm 23 years old and I'm ready to go to the battlefield. Since we were all on bunk beds I woke my bunk mate, Konata, up. Konata is 22 and is just as happy to fight as I am. We've been best friends since Kindergarten and we learned to use a gun at age 11. In the beds next to us were Vash and Rush. They were the strongest men on the team and could handle anything. The weird thing is that no one knows their age...not even them. and on the other side was Ruth and Lloyd. Ruth is a 30 year old ex-bounty hunter who uses a sniper rifle shaped like a black cross. Lloyd on the other hand doesn't even use guns, only swords. As leader of the team I named us 6 "Fallout". Our motto, "We don't fight fair!" It's pretty lame but I guess it works. The commander came over to our bunks and yelled, "FALLOUT FRONT AND CENTER!" We got out of bed and quickly dressed then stood in a line. We were hoping that today we would be the team that graduated and left this hell-hole. "I'll let you maggots in on a secret." the commander whispered. "What?" I asked. "You guys get to leave...." We all shook and giggled with excitement. "if you can wake up Snake." the commander said with a chuckle. "What? You know that's impossible!" I said. "Shh!" Konata hushed me. I grumbled. Snake was a war veteran who stays for training. There was a specific way to wake him up but you sounded like a fool doing it. "Well Ace? You up to it?" the commander said. "I hate being the leader", I sighed. I walked up to Snake and remembered the secret method. I took a deep breath and I started..."Snake?, Snake?!, SNAAAAAKE!!!!!!!." I repeated over and over again till he woke up and that's when it hit me. Snake had the worst morning breath EVER. And when he said "WHAT!!!" I actually fainted. ... When I woke up I saw my weapons of choice by me: 1. A sniper rifle. 2. a shotgun. 3. my favorite sword. 4. the "Trigun". The Trigun had a story of it's own. One day while I was at Konata's house when we were kids, a robber broke in and he carried a 3-barreled revolver with Trigun etched on the side. We set up traps while he looked for us and when he tripped on one of the traps i took the gun...and shot him. After that I learned that it could shoot ANY bullet. Normally we can have only 3 weapons but the Trigun is what the commander calls "Not a Weapon." Konata had the same thing except without the Trigun. Lloyd only had 2 swords. Ruth only had a sniper rifle, and Vash and Ruth only had HUGE mini-guns. Konata said to me, "Get up! The helicopter is ready!'' I got up and rushed to the helicopter with my weapons and we left. Our mission was to eliminate the virus in Panther Creek City then give the orders to nuke the city. The trip took 7 hours and I got ready to jump out with Konata. I looked at the city and saw that it was in ruins. As I daydreamed I remembered what we were supposed to do. As I got ready to jump I saw that one of the mountains next to the city was coming close and the next thing i knew was we were laying near the mountains and only the captains were dead. This is when our nightmare began.
TO BE CONTINUED COMMENT AND RATE TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Wesker218 on Jul 29, 2008 13:05:33 GMT -5
Really?? When I thought it over I kinda thought it was stupid... Thanks tho and I will work on the next chapter.
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Post by Wesker218 on Jul 28, 2008 11:33:44 GMT -5
WARNING!!!! This Story Contains numerous references to anime and video games! It's still a serious story but it has it's jokes... NOTICE!!!! YOUR RATINGS ARE WHAT HELP ME KEEP WRITING!!!!! After a chapter is posted rate and comment if you like. Now for the story preview... This story is about a new squad which is named Fallout. It has six members: David Ace (main character), Konata (another main character), Lloyd (swordsman), Ruth (sniper), Vash ("pack mule" and heavy weaponist), Rush ("pack mule" and another heavy weaponist.) The Fallout Squad is deployed into the city called Panther Creek where one of the worst "T" virus breakouts occured. The Fallout Squad is sent to eliminate the breakout. David Ace is the narrator of the story and Konata is his best friend. Ruth is a pro sniper and Lloyd is the swordsman of the squad. Vash and Rush carry the stuff and use turrets to defend themselves. They easily stand 12 ft. tall and are very intimidating. Everyone else carries 2 guns and a sword. The specific weapons will be revealed in chapter one.
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Post by Wesker218 on Jul 28, 2008 10:16:40 GMT -5
Sweet! I think you told me this story somewhere else...but still it's SWEET!
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Hi!
Jul 6, 2008 17:51:39 GMT -5
Post by Wesker218 on Jul 6, 2008 17:51:39 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Hi!
Jul 6, 2008 17:44:34 GMT -5
Post by Wesker218 on Jul 6, 2008 17:44:34 GMT -5
lol yes i have
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Post by Wesker218 on Jul 6, 2008 16:48:48 GMT -5
Wow that was Great! I'm just gonna use what Leon S. Kennedy said cuz his review sounded more professional
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Hi!
Jul 6, 2008 16:45:53 GMT -5
Post by Wesker218 on Jul 6, 2008 16:45:53 GMT -5
Thanks! I remembered that pic and knew it would be a great background.
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Post by Wesker218 on Jul 6, 2008 16:44:20 GMT -5
Welcome Home- Coheed and cambria
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Hi!
Jul 6, 2008 16:39:42 GMT -5
Post by Wesker218 on Jul 6, 2008 16:39:42 GMT -5
Now I'm known as Wesker218!
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Hi!
Jul 6, 2008 16:28:51 GMT -5
Post by Wesker218 on Jul 6, 2008 16:28:51 GMT -5
Hi! I'm Gigarobmaxx and i'm new to these forums. I have played Resident Evil 1,3,4,0,UC and CV but i own 4,0, and UC. My love for Resident Evil started when i got to like Silent Hill I told my friend on here about it and we both loved it! Then he got into Resident Evil and so did I. I don't know everything about Resident Evil but I know a bit. That's all i can think of ;D
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